Comments for Minna Hong http://www.minnahong.com Fantastical fiction from a fragmented mind Thu, 22 Nov 2012 03:16:29 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.4.1 Comment on The Daily Grind, Part II by Minna Hong http://www.minnahong.com/2012/11/13/the-daily-grind-part-ii/#comment-28 Minna Hong Thu, 22 Nov 2012 03:16:29 +0000 http://www.minnahong.com/?p=56#comment-28 Hey, Morzer! How you doing? I'll give it a read without the adverbs and see what I think. Thanks for the suggestion. Hey, Morzer! How you doing? I’ll give it a read without the adverbs and see what I think. Thanks for the suggestion.

]]> Comment on The Daily Grind, Part II by Morzer http://www.minnahong.com/2012/11/13/the-daily-grind-part-ii/#comment-27 Morzer Thu, 22 Nov 2012 02:47:53 +0000 http://www.minnahong.com/?p=56#comment-27 A friendly suggestion: cut out the adverbs and see whether the piece is stronger as a result. I think you might be pleasantly surprised. A friendly suggestion: cut out the adverbs and see whether the piece is stronger as a result. I think you might be pleasantly surprised.

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